A Prepublished Novel in the Process of Revisions and Rewrites

Sunday, May 16, 2010

Attention: Readers! Opinions and thoughts please...

Good Sunday morning, all!  If you haven't already, please do visit with my good friend Jo Hall. She was my author spotlight this week.  Very interesting and warm author who writes Fantasy.

I've news!  I'm working the sequel to Curse of the Marhime as we speak. Actually, I'm reading Curse--yes, I am reading my own book *grin* --and making notes so I am refreshed of all the minute details and story threads so the sequel will be fresh and contain all the things YOU the reader want to know.  And of course, lots of new twists and turns.

What do I need from YOU the readers?  Simply this.  If you've read Curse, I'd like to know your thoughts on what you'd like to see moving forward.  Who was your favorite character? What parts of the story did you feel you wanted more information? To continue? As added incentive for your comments and thoughts:  Anyone whose suggestions I use or ideas I expand upon in the sequel will be 'acknowledged' within the credits! Yes! Your name will appear in my book.

If you haven't read the books, please do.  I would love to know your thoughts. Without the reader an author is nothing.  

I have lots more in store for you, and of course, if you've read Bestial Cravings, my companion short story, also part of the Roma Wolf Tales series, we have more of Vesta and Torr! So in short, new adventures, new characters, suspense, discovery, history, and future. What more can you ask for?

Back to work now.

Have a wonderful week!



  1. I have to be honest with you. I loved the book and anything you elaborate on will make me very happy.
    Scare me a little more if you can!
    Other then that write, I am waiting!!!
    Love you sweet Dayana!

  2. Hi, Mary! Thank you for your thoughts. I will certainly try for more nailbiting suspense and worry though as you know I don't write horror, LOL So I'm not sure how much I'll terrorize you.


  3. Dayana! You are writing again! Happy dance! I agree with Mary-- you did good and I want to see more. Sorry if this doesn't help much. But I think you kmow exactly what to write. Just let it flow. And yeah, scare us!

  4. Hi Dayana. I'm looking forward to a continuance of this story. You're a great storyteller so I'm looking forward to more about Pita's background. I also liked your hero's elderly aunt. Are you putting her in the sequel? Please feel free to go into as much detail as you like because you have a wonderful way with words and when a story grabs me, I want to know more. I can't wait to read it!