tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9211457342502896879.post4825756017665303006..comments2023-10-20T09:27:11.986-04:00Comments on Dayana Knight, Paranormal Author: The Art of Creating wonderful Imagery through use of the Senses.Dayanahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03345946706697474586noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9211457342502896879.post-81363161165692793862009-04-16T22:52:00.000-04:002009-04-16T22:52:00.000-04:00I enjoy going to the local wildlife refuge, sittin...I enjoy going to the local wildlife refuge, sitting quietly and listening to the sounds of nature. If I'm lucky, I may see a deer, rabbit, unique bird, etc. Of course, I always have my camera along just in case. It's also a wonderful place to sit and read.LuAnnhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13049897327581610278noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9211457342502896879.post-18540059082603953782009-04-16T22:07:00.000-04:002009-04-16T22:07:00.000-04:00Beautiful imagery, Dayana. What good is a garden s...Beautiful imagery, Dayana. What good is a garden scene if you can't see and smell the flowers?<br />Your words take the reader with you.M.Flagghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10103836537099873046noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9211457342502896879.post-80976755468414075922009-04-16T20:46:00.000-04:002009-04-16T20:46:00.000-04:00Good post, Dayna. Using description so we can pic...Good post, Dayna. Using description so we can picture along with reading is great, as long as one doesn't over do it, going on and on.Pam Phttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15707336988423231812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9211457342502896879.post-32403544905424778932009-04-16T20:25:00.000-04:002009-04-16T20:25:00.000-04:00I enjoyed your post very much. Those details in d...I enjoyed your post very much. Those details in describing a characters surroundings is what really makes a story. It really helps you be able to put yourself into the story. It makes it a story so much more enjoyable.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9211457342502896879.post-18471241216726090102009-04-16T18:11:00.000-04:002009-04-16T18:11:00.000-04:00Dayana- Very good comments and I liked the example...Dayana- Very good comments and I liked the examples. But I have to admit that the examples made me laugh! Why? Because I am an attorney and I think and write sparsely and "tight" like the first example! I would have soooo much stretching and learning to do if I ever decide to write romance!! Of course that is one reason I love to READ romance!!! And by following these blogs I have learned to pay attention to things like POV and expression etc. So thanks for improving my perceptions!Martha Eskuchenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14403539348594584733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9211457342502896879.post-37195442868271317542009-04-16T16:02:00.000-04:002009-04-16T16:02:00.000-04:00Great job illuminating the mystery of description....Great job illuminating the mystery of description. :) I'm on a diet so all I can think about is taboo foods. :( I'm glad you stuck with a garden...Skhyehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17623285634625677894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9211457342502896879.post-50189069090631962172009-04-16T14:08:00.000-04:002009-04-16T14:08:00.000-04:00I really enjoyed your post. When I read I like to ...I really enjoyed your post. When I read I like to be able to see where the characters are, the scenery, the people around them, what they are wearing and doing. I think this would be a hard part of writing. Everyone has a few stories in their heads, but it takes this imagery to put it down into a book and make it readable.Judyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02625886775965231468noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-9211457342502896879.post-62277385707639430912009-04-16T14:00:00.000-04:002009-04-16T14:00:00.000-04:00Hi Dayana, I'm with you, you know how important im...Hi Dayana, I'm with you, you know how important imagery is to me. If I can't sense it, I can't get there.<br />Great post.Mary Ricksenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12676306822821614446noreply@blogger.com